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2011-10-20 10:19:58
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Document: draft-ietf-dnsext-rfc2672bis-dname-24
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2011-10-20
IESG Telechat date: 2011-10-20

[Apologies for the late review--I had some unexpected travel, and let this one 
fall through the cracks.]

Summary: This draft is very close to ready for publication as proposed 
standard. My substantive comments from version 22 have all been addressed. 
There are still a couple of remaining nits.

Major issues:

None. [The missing sections I commented on in my previous review have been 
added back in as sections 3.4.2 and 6, respectively.]

Minor issues:

None.

Nits/editorial comments:

-- idnits still has some comments, please check

-- Abstract: Still need to explicitly say the draft "obsoletes" 2672 and 
"updates" the other RFCs mentioned in the header.
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