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Re: [dane] Last Call: <draft-ietf-dane-protocol-19.txt> (The DNS-Based Authentication of Named Entities (DANE) Protocol for Transport Layer Security (TLS)) to Proposed Standard

2012-04-12 14:14:08

On 12. 4. 2012, at 13:34, Peter Palfrader wrote:

On Thu, 12 Apr 2012, Ondřej Surý wrote:

In Section 1.3:

"A DNS query can return multiple certificate associations, such as in
 the case of a server is changing from one certificate to another."

The sentence seems incorrect.

Dave already commented on this.  I also don't see anything wrong with the
sentence.

It's probably a language nit, not a factual issue.  Maybe the sentence
would read better as follows:

| A DNS query can return multiple certificate associations, such as in
| the case of a server which is changing from one certificate to another."
                      ^^^^^


Ah, true.  I am almost blind to these kind of issues after reading this
document too many times.

Thanks go to both of you.

O.
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