I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-behave-lsn-requirements-07
Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
Review Date: 3-July-2012
IETF LC End Date: 10-July-2012
IESG Telechat date: Pending
Summary: The document is ready for publication as a BCP.
Major Issues: None
Minor Issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
I found it is to be odd to have a requirements document as a BCP, but I
am sure
you can sort the right status out with IESG.
I found the justification for REQ-6 hard to read/understand. Why does
access to
servers being on the internal network need to go through CGN at all?
REQ-10:
Justification: It is anticipated that CGNs will be primarily
deployed in ISP networks where the need for management is
critical. This requirement is at the SHOULD level to acocunt for
typo: account
the fact that some CGN operators may not need management
functionality.
Oh really :-)? (Sorry, couldn't resist.)