In particular: should bullet 15,2 (and its supporting text elsewhere)
be removed?
15,2 should probably say "People employed in the IETF Secretariat….".
I would leave it in. My thinking is that the IESG, IAB, and IAOC have
oversight
roles over the Secretariat and RFC Editor. Having people employed by these
organizations be directly involved in the selection of the IESG, IAB, and IAOC
would be odd.
Yes, that was the intent of having it in. The devil, though, is in the details.
Do others have wisdom to add here?
Barry