Hiya,
On 19/08/14 16:33, Stephen Kent wrote:
You are right that I failed to compare the released -03 version to
the pre-release version. When I began to read the released -03 version
I noted that almost none of the suggested changes appeared in the
abstract or in most of section 1, which promoted my reply. But, I agree
that I should have read the rest of the doc before commenting.
Now that I have read the whole doc, I see that Viktor did adopt make
changes
reflecting some of my comments, though not consistently. My apologies for
not reading the entirety of the new version before commenting.
Thanks. And thanks for the substantial suggested text.
I'm sure Viktor will process that as soon he can. (I'll
also do a diff of this vs. -03, if you have text in an
easier to diff form that'd be great to send to Viktor,
Paul and I or whack up on a web site somewhere.)
Cheers,
S.