Hi David,
Thank you for the review.
A new version is available online:
http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-v6ops-cidr-prefix-02
A diff from the previous version is available at:
http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-v6ops-cidr-prefix-02
Cheers,
Med
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De : Black, David [mailto:david(_dot_)black(_at_)emc(_dot_)com]
Envoyé : mardi 21 avril 2015 01:55
À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed IMT/OLN; alexandre(_dot_)petrescu(_at_)cea(_dot_)fr;
fred(_at_)cisco(_dot_)com;
General Area Review Team (gen-art(_at_)ietf(_dot_)org)
Cc : ietf(_at_)ietf(_dot_)org; v6ops(_at_)ietf(_dot_)org; Black, David
Objet : Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-v6ops-cidr-prefix-01
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-v6ops-cidr-prefix-01
Reviewer: David Black
Review Date: April 20, 2015
IETF LC End Date: April 20, 2015
Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that
should be fixed before publication.
This is a short crisp draft on behavior of CIDR prefixes in IPv6
forwarding
with respect to the /64 boundary in IPv6 addresses. It's clear, well
explained
easy to understand, plus refreshingly short. Nicely done!
Major issues: (none)
Minor issues: (none)
Nits/editorial comments: Ok, I found a nit ... and so did idnits ;-).
-- Abstract
Hardware and software
algorithms should therefore impose no rules on prefix length, but
implement longest-match-first on prefixes of any valid length.
"algorithms" isn't the right word.
I suggest "implementations of routing and forwarding"
idnits pointed out that: A later version (-06) exists of
draft-ietf-opsec-v6-05
Thanks,
--David
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