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Re: I-D Action: draft-crocker-rfc2418bis-wgguidelines-01.txt

2015-10-28 23:36:12
On 10/28/2015 9:11 PM, Scott Bradner wrote:
imo - any document that updates an existing document (especially technical 
standards and process documents)
needs to include a section that says what the differences are between the old 
version and the new version so
that readers can find out what they need to do differently than they have 
been doing

I do not see such a section in this document

Scott,

Section 1.1 contains a general statement about the nature of changes made.

But more importantly I believe your assertion of the specifics that are
needed is pretty much never met for any of the IETF document revisions
I've seen over the years.


d/
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Dave Crocker
Brandenburg InternetWorking
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