ietf
[Top] [All Lists]

Re: Genart Telechat review draft-ietf-eppext-keyrelay-11

2015-12-17 06:51:32
Robert, thank you for your review(s), and Rik, thanks for the edits.
Your proposed wording below works for me.

Jari

On 15 Dec 2015, at 21:20, Rik Ribbers <rik(_dot_)ribbers(_at_)sidn(_dot_)nl> 
wrote:

Robert,


I also still think you would have a stronger document if it discussed the 
SHOULD NOT in the security section as I suggest below. I think you read that 
to be me suggesting you change it to MUST NOT. That was not the intent. I 
was asking you to add to the document _why_ it wasn't MUST NOT.

I’ll take that into consideration, as I have explained it in the response the 
wording isn’t that difficult anymore. There are some more IESG review comment 
on this section so I assume there will another version to before publication.

Current wording:

A server SHOULD NOT perform any transformation on data under server 
management when processing a \<keyrelay:create\> command.

Proposed wording:

A server SHOULD NOT perform any transformation on data under server 
management when processing a \<keyrelay:create\> command. The intent of this 
command is to put DNSSEC key material on the poll queue of another client. To 
make sure that this EPP extension is interoperable with the different server 
policies that already have implemented EPP this extension it is not 
classified as must not.

Please let me know what you think of this proposal (or send in text ;-))

Gr,
Rik

Attachment: signature.asc
Description: Message signed with OpenPGP using GPGMail

<Prev in Thread] Current Thread [Next in Thread>