Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready with Nits
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Document: draft-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion-??
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2017-03-14
IETF LC End Date: 2017-02-21
IESG Telechat date: 2017-03-16
Summary: Ready with slightly more minor nits than before.
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
1. Introduction
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exploited in the attacks document in [RFC7258] and the threats
s/document/documented/
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There also tensions with latency of operation.
Missing "are", although I think it should probably be "There is
tension"
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to restore metadat
Should be: to restore metadata
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