Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
Review result: Ready with Nits
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Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc5285-bis-11
Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
Review Date: 2017-05-10
IETF LC End Date: 2017-04-20
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
Summary: Ready with nits.
Major issues: 0
Minor issues: 0
Nits/editorial comments:
- S5: s/An example (this is only an example), where/An example where/
(I suspect that the reader will get the idea that this is only an
example. There are a couple of occurrence of this in S5.)
- S6: s/When doing SDP Offer/When engaging in SDP Offer/
Thanks!