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Re: Last Call: draft-ietf-lemonade-deployments (Deployment Considerations for lemonade-compliant Mobile Email) to BCP

2007-01-16 10:34:46
from [Frank Ellermann] [Permanent Link] 
The IESG wrote:


   <draft-ietf-lemonade-deployments-04.txt> as a BCP


s/marjup/markup/  
How about s/HTTP/HTTP or better HTTPS/ somewhere in 4 ?
 
s/exist a large number/exists a large number/ in 8 (?)

Please expand the first use of DMZ - I didn't know the
abbreviation - but of course Google found it for me ;-)

FWIW, I like that I-D.

Frank



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