At 6:32 PM +0100 1/16/07, Frank Ellermann wrote:
How about s/HTTP/HTTP or better HTTPS/ somewhere in 4 ?
I don't think HTTPS is a sufficiently different protocol from HTTP to
warrant making any distinction for the purposes of Section 4.
s/exist a large number/exists a large number/ in 8 (?)
I think you're right, but it sounds funny to my ear, so I'd prefer
"there are a large number".
Please expand the first use of DMZ - I didn't know the
abbreviation - but of course Google found it for me ;-)
How about "Placing servers inside one or more DMZs (demilitarized
zones, also called perimeter networks) can protect the rest of the
network"?
FWIW, I like that I-D.
Thanks.
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