2011/12/13 SM <sm(_at_)resistor(_dot_)net>:
At 11:07 13-12-2011, Mykyta Yevstifeyev wrote:
This may be read as if RFC 5988 is to determine all the rel types that
were used at the time of its writing, but I don't think the paragraph
directly implies this. I mean that it hasn't been registered either
centralized (in RFC 5988) or separately here.
In the Introduction Section, the following sentence could be dropped:
"However, 'disclosure' relation type has not been mentioned in RFC 5988
when creating the registry for relation types; nor was it registered
separately."
The last paragraph of that section explains what the document is about.
I've already done this, per Julian's comments.
I suggest an editorial change in Section 2:
"Whenever the 'disclosure' relation is defined, the target IRI
[RFC5998] MUST either"
Added.
Quoting the example in Section 3:
"The following are the patent disclosures known at present made
with respect to this specification:
<ul><a rel="disclosure" href="http://patent.gov/8546987";>
U.S. Patent No. 8546987</a></ul>
<ul><a rel="disclosure" href="http://ipr.su/pat/98745-6";>
U.S.S.R. Patent No. 98745-6</a></ul>
<ul><a rel="disclosure" href="ftp://ftp.legal.va/a/patent3.pdf";>
Vatical City State Patent No. 3</a></ul>"
If the IETF takes the security of the Vatican City seriously (there's a typo
in the example), I suggest adding a ".example" at the end of the domain
names.
I'm fine with this. So I've changed this to:
The following are the patent disclosures known at present made
with respect to this specification:
<ul><a rel="disclosure" href="http://patent.gov.example/8546987";>
U.S. Patent No. 8546987</a></ul>
<ul><a rel="disclosure" href="http://ipr.su.example/pat/98745-6";>
U.S.S.R. Patent No. 98745-6</a></ul>
<ul><a rel="disclosure" href="http://pat.va.example/a/patent3.pdf";>
Vatical City State Patent No. 3</a></ul>
Mykyta Yevstifeyev
Regards,
-sm
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