On Fri, May 10, 2013 at 7:37 AM, Joel M. Halpern
<jmh(_at_)joelhalpern(_dot_)com>wrote:
I am guessing that the authors intended the addition of the text
emphasizing that the no-zone typedefs are derived general typedef addresses
the difference in the patterns.
Is there a YANG rule that says tat if typedef X is derived from typedef Y
then the string for X must match the pattern for X and the pattern for Y?
If so, then my concern below is misplaced. (The fact that I find the
vague pattern for the child misleading is not a fault with the document,
but rather in my head, under that requirement.)
Yes. RFC 6020, sec. 9.4.6.
All the patterns are ANDed together.
Yours,
Joel
Andy
On 4/19/2013 6:24 PM, Joel M. Halpern wrote:
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6021-bis-**01
Common YANG Data Types
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 19-April-2013
IETF LC End Date: 1-May-2013
IESG Telechat date: N/A
Summary: This document is nearly ready for publication as a Standards
Track RFC
Major issues:
(The following may well be a non-issue.)
In the revision of the ietf-inet-types, the patterns for the new
ip4-address-no-zone and ipv6-address-no-zone are drastically simplified
from the ipv4-address and ipv6-address patterns. The new
ipv4-address-no-zone allows any sequence of decimal digits an periods,
while the original was carefully defined as dotted quads of 0..255.
Similarly, te ipv6-address-no-zone allows any arbitrary sequence of hex
digits and colons. The original patterns were very careful to match
rules for validity. Is there a reason for the change.
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
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