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RE: [TLS] Last Call: <draft-ietf-tls-ecdhe-psk-aead-03.txt> (ECDHE_PSK with AES-GCM and AES-CCM Cipher Suites for Transport Layer Security (TLS)) to Proposed Standard

2017-05-18 12:52:09
Hi Simon, 

Thank you for the review. I believe we have addressed your comments in our 
version 04. Please see my comments inline. 

Yours, 
Daniel

-----Original Message-----
From: TLS [mailto:tls-bounces(_at_)ietf(_dot_)org] On Behalf Of Simon 
Friedberger
Sent: Thursday, May 04, 2017 5:59 PM
To: ietf(_at_)ietf(_dot_)org
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Subject: Re: [TLS] Last Call: <draft-ietf-tls-ecdhe-psk-aead-03.txt> (ECDHE_PSK 
with AES-GCM and AES-CCM Cipher Suites for Transport Layer Security (TLS)) to 
Proposed Standard

Nits:

        RFC 4279 reference is missing.
MGLT: It seems the reference is mentioned in the current version in the 
Normative reference as well  as in the introduction at line 127,  in section 3 
line 143. In case you meant another reference, please let us know. 



        "TLS 1.3 and above version, " should probably be "TLS 1.3 and above" or 
"TLS 1.3 and higher versions"
MGLT: Changed to "TLS 1.3 and higher versions"

On 04/05/17 18:41, The IESG wrote:
The IESG has received a request from the Transport Layer Security WG
(tls) to consider the following document:
- 'ECDHE_PSK with AES-GCM and AES-CCM Cipher Suites for Transport Layer
   Security (TLS)'
  <draft-ietf-tls-ecdhe-psk-aead-03.txt> as Proposed Standard

The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits 
final comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the 
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Abstract


   This document defines several new cipher suites for the Transport
   Layer Security (TLS) protocol.  The cipher suites are all based on
   the Ephemeral Elliptic Curve Diffie-Hellman with Pre-Shared Key
   (ECDHE_PSK) key exchange together with the Authenticated Encryption
   with Associated Data (AEAD) algorithms AES-GCM and AES-CCM.  PSK
   provides light and efficient authentication, ECDHE provides perfect
   forward secrecy, and AES-GCM and AES-CCM provides encryption and
   integrity protection.




The file can be obtained via
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tls-ecdhe-psk-aead/

IESG discussion can be tracked via
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tls-ecdhe-psk-aead/ballot/


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