I got some review comments back from the IRTF on the DNSwL draft, so I've
done another version:
http://asrg.sp.am/draft-irtf-asrg-dnsbl-03.txt
Please take a look, if nobody hates it I'll send it off on Monday.
Regards,
John Levine, johnl(_at_)iecc(_dot_)com, Primary Perpetrator of "The Internet for
Dummies",
Information Superhighwayman wanna-be, http://www.johnlevine.com, ex-Mayor
"More Wiener schnitzel, please", said Tom, revealingly.
PS: The comments said:
I have done a review of this document. I think it could use a bit
more attention in section 2.3. This section mentions an
"organization" may use a variety of DNSxLs for different purposes.
I believe this statement can be expanded and made more clear. In
particular, the next sentence discusses "multiple sublists", but no
definition has yet been given for just what that is, and how it
relates to an organization and its variety of DNSxLs. In the next
paragraph it mentions subdomains and sublists.
I think with another pass on this part {and a definition for the term rDNS
in 2.1} and the doc would be ok.
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