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RE: WG Last Call: draft-ietf-opes-architecture-00

2002-05-21 10:48:56

noted,

abbie

-----Original Message-----
From: Oskar Batuner [mailto:batuner(_at_)attbi(_dot_)com]
Sent: Monday, May 20, 2002 5:45 PM
To: Markus Hofmann; OPES Group
Subject: RE: WG Last Call: draft-ietf-opes-architecture-00



Two typos:

Chapter 3.1:

line 3:
 Stepwise means A delegates to B and B delegates to C and so force.

should be "so forth".

line 8:
   data "provider" color.  The only colors that are defined 
are data the
   "provider" and the data "consumer". 

Should be: 
   data "provider" color.  The only colors that are defined 
are the data 
   "provider" and the data "consumer". 

- Oskar

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