So instead of:
The chair of the IAOC may be removed at any time by the affirmative
vote of two-thirds of the voting members of the IAOC, or as a result
of his or her departure from the IAOC.
we could say
If the chair leaves the IAOC, or if two thirds of the voting IAOC members
vote in favour of removing him, the term of the chair ends immediately.
Better?
another nit:
s/removing him/removal/
Geoff
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