On 7/10/06 at 8:34 AM -0400, IETF Administrative Director wrote:
we seek comments on the Statement of Work located at:
http://koi.uoregon.edu/~iaoc/
- The SOW has nothing about performance expectations (i.e., what is
noted in section 4 of draft-mankin-pub-req-10). Though I don't think
the SOW should have hard requirements in this regard
(draft-mankin-pub-req-10 doesn't), I do think we need to give some
estimate of how many documents they're going to see and their
expected throughput. A bid is going to have to be based on how fast
they think they need to do the editing.
- The SOW mentions the Editorial Board for Independent submissions,
but doesn't say where it comes from. I take it from the slides at the
Thursday plenary that this is still in flux, but at least there
should be a note indicating that this is going to be filled in later.
I've already written privately about some nits. Here are couple more:
- Strike A-1-g-3. It's redundant with A-1-g-1.
- Change "category" to "stream" in A-4-b. "Category" doesn't make any
sense there (or if it does, it's undefined.)
pr
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