At 9:58 AM +0200 9/9/08, Simon Josefsson wrote:
I suggest to remove the newly added text, making section 4.c read:
c. License. Code Components are hereby licensed to each person
who wishes to receive such a license on the terms of the "BSD
License", as follows:
Without this change, I believe it is not sufficiently clear that code
components are _only_ licensed under the BSD license.
Fully agree.
Thus, I suggest to change the above sentence to:
b. Identification. Text in IETF Contributions and IETF
Documents of the types identified in Section 4.a above shall
constitute "Code Components". In addition, any text found
between the markers <CODE BEGINS> and <CODE ENDS> shall be
considered a "Code Component". Alternatively, text in the
document that refer to this rule can be added to denote which
portions are intended to be regarded as Code Components.
You could also revert to the earlier text used in the 08-05-08 and
08-13-08 version:
b. Identification. For ease of reference, Code Components in
IETF RFCs MUST be clearly identified as code, and one technique
for clearly identifying it is <CODE BEGINS> <CODE ENDS>.
Either sounds good, and the latter is more in line with IETF history.
One final comment:
#3:
For good style, attribute the origin of the BSD license text used. If
the IETF requests of others to attribute origins of work, setting a good
example helps. According to Jorge in
<http://permalink.gmane.org/gmane.ietf.ipr/5379> the source is:
http://www.opensource.org/licenses/bsd-license.php
Eating our own dogfood: good.
--Paul Hoffman, Director
--VPN Consortium
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