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Re: I-D Action:draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis-12.txt

2009-11-24 10:01:19
Julian Reschke wrote:
...
JRE: the way paragraph 2 is generated, we end up with instances where
the 1st and 2nd sentence both start with "This document". This is ugly.
Is it too late to fix this?
...

To illustrate the problem: for "IETF Experimental, with Consensus Call", we get:

"This document defines an Experimental Protocol for the Internet community. This document is a product of the Internet Engineering Task Force (IETF). It represents the consensus of the IETF community..."

I think

"This document defines an Experimental Protocol for the Internet community. It is a product of the Internet Engineering Task Force (IETF) and represents the consensus of the IETF community..."

would read much better.

Best regards, Julian


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