Hello all,
Summarizing all LC comments received so far, I'd like to propose the
author of draft-ietf-pim-registry-03.txt the following changes to his
document:
1. Abstract
Explain the abbreviations.
2. Introduction
Explain the abbreviations.
3. Add a new section directly after Introduction named '2. Registry
Description' with the following content:
2.1. The Name of the Registry
The name of created registry is 'Protocol Independent Multicast
(PIM) Message Types'.
2.2. The Format of the Registry
The 'Protocol Independent Multicast (PIM) Message Types' registry
consists of 3 values: Packet Type, Description and Reference. They
are described below:
Packet Type - an integer; values form 0 to 15 are assigned.
Description - a brief decryption of packet type.
Reference - the reference document, that defines the packet type.
2.3. Registration Procedures
New assignments to 'Protocol Independent Multicast (PIM) Message Types'
registry SHALL be made following the 'IETF Consensus' policies.
[RFC5226]
2.4. The Initial Contents of the Registry
This section contains the initial contents of the 'Protocol
Independent Multicast (PIM)
Message Types' registry.
+---------+-------------------------------------+------------------+
| Type | Description | Reference |
+--------+-------------------------------------+-------------------+
|0 | Hello |[RFC3973] [RFC4601]|
|1 | Register |[RFC4601] |
|2 | Register Stop |[RFC4601] |
|3 | Join/Prune |[RFC3973] [RFC4601]|
|4 | Bootstrap |[RFC4601] |
|5 | Assert |[RFC3973] [RFC4601]|
|6 | Graft |[RFC3973] |
|7 | Graft-Ack |[RFC3973] |
|8 | Candidate RP Advertisement |[RFC4601] |
|9 | State Refresh |[RFC3973] |
|10 | DF Election |[RFC5015] |
|11-14 | Unassigned |this document |
|15 | Reserved |this document |
+--------+-------------------------------------+-------------------+
2.5. Sub-Registries
No sub-registries are currently defined in 'Protocol Independent
Multicast (PIM)
Message Types' registry.
4. Security Consideration: renumber
5. IANA Considerations: renumber, modify in the following way:
IANA is asked to create the Protocol Independent Multicast (PIM)
Message Types' registry following Section 2 of this document.
6. Other sections: renumber.
I suppose the author will accept my proposal that makes the registry
description more clear.
All the best,
Mykyta Yevstifeyev
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