On 11/6/2012 2:01 PM, Brian E Carpenter wrote:
but I remain bothered by taking
out all the details. I understand there is a problem of attention span,
but there are not really all that many words in the current version.
Simple human factors:
You cannot expect anyone to process a mass of text from a slide and
develop useful understanding, nevermind take required action.
Making a useful slide requires synthesizing it to show only the
essential information. That's what I understand the current excise to
be and it is exactly the right thing to do.
The slide we show should have a very terse statement of the topic, the
reader's obligations and where to go to find out more.
d/
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Dave Crocker
Brandenburg InternetWorking
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