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Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-tp-rosetta-stone-12

2013-10-13 15:01:37
 A comment can be a discussion/opinion for the draft that is at the IETF
level, I did review but not completed writing the output. However, my
comment may influenced comments today at WG level (usually the draft passed
such review of WG LC) which did not send there comments  to the IETF list,
but the authors are gaining so far. I prefer that all comments should be at
the IETF list after the IETF LC to give chance for discussion if needed (as
a community DISCUSS position).

AB

On Sunday, October 13, 2013, joel jaeggli wrote:


On Oct 13, 2013, at 7:32 AM, Abdussalam Baryun 
<abdussalambaryun(_at_)gmail(_dot_)com>
wrote:

Yes, my comment meant that it is a reply to the review message that
there may be not clear definition from other participant point of view.
Sorry my review is still not complete, I will send it. Do you mean my reply
is not right, if I like to give a short comment before my full review.

AB

On Sunday, October 13, 2013, Adrian Farrel wrote:
Hi,

I am having sever difficulty parsing all of the information from your
comment.
And currently cannot see anything actionable by the authors.

The draft does not list ITU in abbreviation,

Loa has answered why this is not necessary.

You mean that IETF agrees to do that as per a RFC xxxx passed or
community awareness.

there are many terminology not clear but more general definition.  I
prefer specific defining.

This comment gives us nothing to go on! Which terminology do you find
not clear
but is a more general definition? And why is this a problem?

You cannot expect the authors to fix or even discuss something if you do
not
show them what you are talking about.
I am talking about the draft in overall, I will do my review if time is
available.


Insubstantial comments during the last call by someone who claims to have
not reviewed the document are rather condescending. If you were the author
what would you do with this "feedback"?

Expectations of collegiality require a certain respect for common purpose,
and the purpose of the last call is to surface remaining issues of
substance, test for consensus and move on. (2418 section 8)

Also many times refers to references to define without mentioning
what was that definition,

What do you mean? Can you give an example and say how you think it
should be?
Will be shown in a full review message, this was a comment message, but
thanks for your advise

is that defined only in ITU and IETF cannot define its technology, or
is it agreeing on a joint definition so IETF is just following ITU in
some
terms.

*This* document is seeking IETF consensus. If that consensus is reached
all
definitions will be IETF definitions. If those definitions originate in
ITU-T
documents, they are also ITU-T definitions. If ITU-T documents make
normative
reference to IETF documents that contain definitions, those definitions
are
ITU-T definitions.

Maybe I have missed the point of your comment.

The point is why do we need other organisation definitions, or why did
the author use those definitions, my point is any definition should relate
to internet technology not references of other org, we may use other
definitions for ours.

Adrian