Hello,
I just read the new version of the draft, it's nice to see that most
suggestion/comments were added to the draft.
First, I would like to say I do support your draft.
Second, I noticed you changed the title of your draft from:
"Improving the ISOC Fellowship programme to Attracting people from
under-represented regions into
the IETF"
to
"Improving the ISOC Fellowship programme to attract people from
under-represented regions into the IETF"
IMHO opinion -and not being native English speaker- you improved it a
little bit but I think the previous comments suggested even something
more generic, like just improving the ISOC fellowship programme and not
only "attack" people to the IETF. I mean, it's very true you mention
several other things in your draft besides attracting people.
Thanks,
Alejandro,
On 10/10/13 13:40, S Moonesamy wrote:
Hi Jari,
Here's is a draft about improving the ISOC Fellowship programme to
attract people from under-represented regions into the IETF. The draft
builds upon the ISOC work, proposing adjustments and additional efforts,
with the goal of enabling more sustained and active participation by
contributors from under-represented regions.
In a blog article ( http://www.ietf.org/blog/2013/04/diversity/ ), it is
mentioned that:
"The design team will present their recommendations to the community,
and engage in the discussion. Recommendations with community support
will be taken forward."
The draft only makes suggestions instead of recommendations. I am
copying this message to ietf(_at_)ietf(_dot_)org so that the community can
comment
about the draft.
Regards,
S. Moonesamy