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Re: Suggested changes to draft-moonesamy-ietf-conduct-3184bis-04

2013-12-15 17:49:35
On 12/15/13, 16:01 , S Moonesamy wrote:
Hi Dave,
At 12:54 15-12-2013, Dave Crocker wrote:
Small suggestion is to add (rough), so that a casual reader won't miss
that our version of consensus does not mean unanimity.

Thanks for the feedback (and to Arturo too).  I'll get back to this in a
day or two as  there are some other suggested changes.

Regards,
S. Moonesamy

Thank you, this incorporates the concepts I was looking for.

I like Dave's suggestion. Another small suggestion, the paragraph uses both "person" and "participant". I wonder if it wouldn't be a little cleaner to use only one or the other.

Even without any additional changes, it looks much better now.

Thanks.


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