I've posted -02 of this draft:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-kucherawy-rfc7437bis/
I think it incorporates all of the suggestions I've received except for:
(a) Allison's suggestion for guidance about using "slow thinking" in its
deliberations (waiting for text); and
(b) Michael's suggestion to re-work eligibility (needs more discussion or
an actual text proposal).
Please look at the diff to confirm I captured your ideas and didn't break
the document in the process. I'll spin up -03 after another round of
feedback and/or the above items appear.
Thanks!
-MSK