Julian, I won't have the time to go over it in great detail, but I can
just suggest to break up some of the paragraphs. They are long and with
multiple points. It helps keep the reader "interested by breaking it
up into separate paragraphs. That would be technical writing style.
--
Hector Santos, Santronics Software, Inc.
http://www.santronics.com
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From: "Julian Mehnle" <julian(_at_)mehnle(_dot_)net>
Newsgroups: spf.-.sender.policy.framework.discussion
To: "SPF Discussion" <spf-discuss(_at_)v2(_dot_)listbox(_dot_)com>
Sent: Wednesday, February 08, 2006 11:30 AM
Subject: [spf-discuss] IAB appeal draft
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Hi all,
here's a carefully considered draft for the IAB appeal. Sorry for the
delay! Please review it soon!
Julian.
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