On Wed 2015-06-03 18:58:56 -0400, christopher liljenstolpe wrote:
those seem like reasonable issues to identify. Daniel, do you want to
edit the gist, and send me a pull?
It's not clear to me how to give you a pull request on a gist via
github's interface. I just mailed you a wordsmithing patch, which i'm
also including here.
Regards,
--dkg
From 7b367bdf517820bc97ef6d348d4c728e36148e5f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Daniel Kahn Gillmor <dkg(_at_)fifthhorseman(_dot_)net>
Date: Wed, 3 Jun 2015 21:03:15 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] wordsmithing
---
openpgp-charter.md | 12 +++++++-----
1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
diff --git a/openpgp-charter.md b/openpgp-charter.md
index 1617533..263a29a 100644
--- a/openpgp-charter.md
+++ b/openpgp-charter.md
@@ -44,15 +44,17 @@ produce a revision of RFC4880 to address issues that have
been
identified by the community since the working group was originally
closed.
-Some of the revisions might include, but are not limited to:
+These revisions will include, but are not limited to:
-* inclusion of the CFRG elliptic curves
+* Inclusion of elliptic curves recommended by the CFRG
-* proper AEAD symmetric crypto
+* A symmetric encryption mechanism that offers modern message
+ integrity protection (e.g. AEAD)
-* updated mandatory-to-implement algorithms
+* Revision of mandatory-to-implement algorithm selection and
+ deprecation of weak algorithms
-* updated fingerprints
+* An updated public-key fingerprint mechanism
The Working Group will perform the following work
-------------------------------------------------
--
2.1.4
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