At 08:19 10-11-2008, Russ Housley wrote:
To make them all parallel in structure, the first numbered item in
section 3 becomes: "1. The IESG finds no conflict between this
document and IETF work."
In RFC 3932, these numbered items (except the first one, which is
the same until the modification above) begin "The IESG
thinks" During pre-Last-Call-review, I received feedback that "The
IESG finds" was a better. Now, you propose "The IESG
believes". I do believe that the current wording is better than
the original. I'm willing to change it to something else if there
is consensus to do so. What do other reviewers find/think/believe/prefer?
In a different message, John mentioned ""has concluded". That sounds
better as the numbered items are about conclusions reached. My
second preference would be "The IESG believes".
Regards,
-sm
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