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RE: [spf-discuss] draft-schlitt-spf-classic AUTH48 review

2006-03-23 18:07:03
Julian Mehnle wrote:
I'll complete the list of last-minute changes[2] and send it to Meng
on 
Sunday.  If anyone wants anything on that list, raise your voice ASAP!
THIS IS OUR LAST CHANCE!
 2. http://new.openspf.org/draft-schlitt-spf-classic_AUTH48_changes

This change is listed...

Section 4.6.2, 2nd paragraph

OLD:
When a mechanism is evaluated, one of three things can happen: it can match, it 
cannot match, or it can throw an exception.

NEW:
When a mechanism is evaluated, one of three things can happen: it can match, it 
can not match, or it can throw an exception.

I think the new sentence is still confusing (cannot vs. can not.)

How about this:

PROPOSED: When a mechanism is evaluated, one of three things happens: it 
matches; it does not match; or it throws an exception.

This also has a nice syntactic echo with the immediately following paragraph.

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Hispanic Business Inc./HireDiversity.com       Software Engineer

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