Proposed change:
Many Internet-Drafts are working documents of the Internet Engineering Task
Force (IETF); other groups and individuals create Internet-Drafts that are
included in the repository that is maintained by the IETF. That repository is
available at <some URL>.
Perhaps more simply and directly:
The Internet Engineering Task Force (IETF) distributes and retains
Internet-Drafts, as working documents for its own activities and for other
groupsand individuals. The repository for Internet-Drafts is available at <some
URL>.
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Dave Crocker
Brandenburg InternetWorking
bbiw.net
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