On 01/04/2014 01:33 AM, Bjoern Hoehrmann wrote:
If you think it would be a serious problem if the text is interpreted as
in the paraphrase above, then I think revisions to the actual text are
in order, because if there is any difference between the actual text and
the paraphrase, I find it hard to impossible to make out. It is not fine
to keep the text as-is if it is easy to misinterpret.
I welcome honest attempts to improve the text. Lloyd's was
not that.
Feel free to propose better text, I'll be happy to see that.
S.